Finding the Raven, by Patty Dickson Piezca

I want to thank the author of this book, Patty Dickson Piezca, for providing me with an eARC in exchange for an honest review. I was really excited to read this book as this is my first ARC I have ever received, so I am really sad to say that I really did not like this book, which was why I did not finish it. My general policy before I stop reading a book is to read at least half of it, which I did so I put it down because I just didn´t enjoy it very much. Before I start with this review I also want to add, that this review is intended as constructive criticism and in no way as just bashing something I didn´t like. I respect how much work the author put into this, but I still want to say what I thought of this novel.

Title: Finding the Raven

Author: Patty Dickson Piezca

Pages: 292

Published by: Ravenswood Publishing

Rating: 1/5                         

When Julia Dulac's father is murdered onstage  and her inheritance is swindled away, she must work through her grief and fear of poverty to find both the killer and a means of survival with help from the Raven, a black crystal that reveals images of past and future truths. While having the crystal appraised, Julia finds love and her life takes unexpected turns through mystery and betrayal against the backdrop of the 1904 World's Fair in St. Louis.
Through the boarding house window, Julia overhears an argument between Rose and her wealthy father over Rose's illegitimate pregnancy. He drops Rose off, saying he will return in one year, that she must be either single and childless or respectably married. Though from completely different backgrounds, Julia and Rose become fast friends, facing lessons of survival and redemption as their fates become irrevocably entwined.

Having never read a book that wasn´t published by a big publishing house before, I didn´t really know what to expect from this book, so I was really disappointed to see how botched it felt. The author took way too little time with practically everything. In my opinion, to make the story more realistic it would need at least 150 pages or so more. The whole thing just felt rushed, already beginning with the setup of the story. The reader just gets thrown into this world and while that may be refreshing if done right, it just doesn´t work. The whole plot in general just seems to fall into place. It doesn´t feel like it is neither character nor plot driven, but more as if the author knew what needed to happen next in order to get to the final point at the end, so she let the characters do something. Their actions just didn´t feel comprehensible to me. The characters in general are all definitely upgradeable. It seemed as if out of nowhere they suddenly had certain characteristics that just weren´t mentioned before.

Another thing that didn´t sit well with me was the pacing of the story. Time was a thrown around variable. While sometimes things just flew by, in an unbelievable amount of time, some things took way too little time. Some of the longest passages were the ones describing how terrible the food or the hostel were. While, yes I get that it was used to emphasize that there weren´t in a good place, which is fine, I do not need lengthy abstracts to remind me of that several times, thank you. On the contrary, I found that lots of details, which often were important to the story, were skipped, so when it came to use I was surprised. For example: As Rose gets sent away to St. Louis in no way was there mentioned that her father was coming with her, but suddenly he began talking to her. And I was just like: What? Where did he come from? So while we got a long description about the label of a wine bottle, the environment or even the looks of characters were hardly touched on.

In conclusion I just want to add that my main impression of this book is, that the author had a vision in her head, which could have worked out wonderfully, but just weren´t mainly due to the lack of description in certain places. But if you personally really enjoy a light guilty-pleasure read without thinking too much and you are thinking about picking this book up, I would say don´t let me discourage you, hopefully you will enjoy it more than I did.

Have any of you read “Finding the Raven”? And if so what did you think of it?

Read on xx

Lena